This assignment was so challenging and quite a risk because I knew Creative Writing professors have never used online annotation as a tool for their courses. I truly understood that some of my ideas with the annotation comrades lesson plan could be taken as outlandish and unusual. As someone who has taken English Literature and Creative Writing classes at San Francisco State University for 3 years now, it was a worthy chance to be able to make online annotation a great useful assignment just because there are options to make the activity interactive. When I mean interactive, I look at the authentic way in which students look at a piece of poem/short story/monologue/excerpts from a novel contextually and practice more close reading to this assignment (I was reading an article in the Writer’s Chronicle on the Midrash method in Jewish culture when I was thinking about that). However, after reading my peer’s feedback on this assignment (and talking at great lengths with my Creative Writing Professor), hearing and reading the feedback was beneficial. For example, my comrade made note of “students need guidance- they might need to be told what to do and how to do it” (annotation comrades). My Creative Writing professor said almost the exact same thing where I truly need to look at where I could direct them towards metaphor. This is where my article from Hastac was one of those moments that happened for a reason (the article is called “Using Collaborative Annotation to develop Creative Writing Prompts”) What I meant by that is reading the article on annotation ideas for students in a creative writing course and make this experience (especially for creative writing) relatively engaging in this lecture. I believe if I stuck with my plan here in the final (which I posted weeks ago), some of the key points would be lost in the lecture and my whole presentation could be dry. This is where I found feedback from two people especially helpful in this sense and where I can revise this as I get closer to my presentation date on December 10th (to be exact).
One thing I really enjoyed reading my from peers’ thoughts on the assignment was the research aspect. That is something I truly value when it comes to creative writing and English literature course because I don’t think you can get a great sense of what the author’s voice based on just one poem or one novel. My whole understanding is that the students should get that chance to do outside research of the author so that they have an in-depth profile of the poet/novelist. That way you can separate yourself from the speaker vs the author. For example, my comrade pointed out that “As student’s carry out the rest of this assignment, the research requirement serves as a tool for concise and thoughtful annotations” (Annotation comrades). This is where feedback is so beneficial for writers and students of literature because the person gets constructive information to work from. Feedback should be a chance for students to learn about the process and not be stressed over reading these comments from several people. In addition to that, I felt my comrade was very creative with the writing assignment portion here just because how many images and metaphors are embedded in the poem. For example, the speaker said this on one of the lines, “loneliness is lying awake at night, trying to fetch snores” (annotation comrades). To me, this is a strong line just because the purpose of this exercise was a stream of consciousness and the result was these two metaphors. I think if the students really use this method in the exercise, it will be very exciting to hear what they produce writing wise and how it is an imitation of Billy Collins’s poetry.
Overall, I felt very optimistic about my assignment (after reading the feedback from my comrade and agreeing with Creative Writing professor on switching the direction for the lecture) because I think this assignment will turn into an engaging lecture. One of my Creative Writing professors once said: “Perfection is for sick people.” Likewise, it would be very counterintuitive to expect perfection on this assignment (after conducting two drafts of the plan) and there is always room to grow here. After all, that’s why we are in graduate school because we have amazing peers to work within the department and it sets us up to succeed once we become English Literature professors. If all my graduate classes were like this, I truly think the students would find comfort in knowing there is unity in creative writing and English Literature. I really look forward to shaping this lecture and taking note of other articles we read in class to use as resources for it as well.